keeping new friends is most important than make new friends
All are in the same page that relationships and good friends play an important rule in each person's life, keeping friendship and relations are very essentiol in people social and personal life. the importance of making new friends or keeping old friends always questioned amoung people and scholar. in my opinion, continuing the relation with old friends is more important. following reseons will elaborate on my opinion.
First, the old friends definietely have great recognization of each other, they may know each other for many years and also, have a deep understanding of their behavioral features. this understanding give them an ability to be a good partner in happiness or more important in harsh and sever condition. As they know each other well, they can help each other to solve problems, etc. In my personal life for instance, I have close friends from school, whose name is Amir, he knows me very well and even can anticipate my think or read my mind by looking my facial expression. when I was not in the mood, I went to him to ask for some advice which really helped fully.
The second reseon is: as people get older, they have a lot of things to do and are busy. they just care about their family and their closely old friends and may have not enough time to find new friends or spend time and care about them. furthure it is hard to trust newone and it is need less to say that haveing a great friendship is required time and prerecegnizeation. Therefor, people may try to keep their friends rather than accept the risk of finding new people and being friend with them.
its cristally clear that, developing friendzone and communication is one of the most important of each person's life, but based on aforementioned reasons, I think keeping old friends has high priority than looking for a new one.
to sum up, old friends could be a great companion for each person in any condition of their life, they have good understanding and comprehension of your personal features can be very influential in your life, so I suggest to keep old friends.
- it is more important to keep old friends than make new friends 70
- tpo 1 integrated writing 3
- it is better to have broad knowledge in many academic subjects than to specialize in one subject 80
- at universities and college, sports and other social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. 70
- The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... friends play an important rule in each persons life, keeping friendship and relations ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...iol in people social and personal life. the importance of making new friends or kee...
^^^
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...s questioned amoung people and scholar. in my opinion, continuing the relation wit...
^^
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Following
...ion with old friends is more important. following reseons will elaborate on my opinion. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...rstanding of their behavioral features. this understanding give them an ability to b...
^^^^
Line 5, column 575, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...y mind by looking my facial expression. when I was not in the mood, I went to him to...
^^^^
Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ave a lot of things to do and are busy. they just care about their family and their ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 238, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthure
...ends or spend time and care about them. furthure it is hard to trust newone and it is ne...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...people and being friend with them. its cristally clear that, developing friend...
^^^
Line 13, column 104, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...on is one of the most important of each persons life, but based on aforementioned reaso...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...iority than looking for a new one. to sum up, old friends could be a great co...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, really, second, so, well, for instance, i think, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76177285319 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69012866392 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540166204986 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9812444777 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321316534268 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118924458529 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14911345418 0.0737576698707 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202974234419 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115638136548 0.0645574589148 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.