lake
The author claims that there are three solutions to restore the Salton sea from
the high density of salt in it. However, the lecturer points out that these solutions are not feasible and provides three reasons to support her opinion.
First of all, the author suggests that salt can be eliminate directly by transporting the lake's water into the facilities in order to evaporate water. So salt and other materials remain and then by cooling the steam, water returns to the lake. This statement is challenged by the lecturer. She says that the remnant of evaporation is not the only salt and can consist of some toxic chemicals that might be harmful to humans when these chemicals are breathed.
Secondly, the writer contends that water can be transported from the Pacific ocean to the lake. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by asserting that the cost of water transport is high since it needs 100-kilometer pipelines or canals.
Finally. it is stated in the article that the salinity of the lake can be reduced by constructing some walls in order to divide the lake into some sections. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that these walls are so vulnerable to earthquakes and are not a solution for long term purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...solutions to restore the Salton sea from the high density of salt in it. However...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ions to restore the Salton sea from the high density of salt in it. However, th...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...100-kilometer pipelines or canals. Finally. it is stated in the article that the s...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...eter pipelines or canals. Finally. it is stated in the article that the salin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 1977.66487455 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 210.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91904761905 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55149238264 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0119096788 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223812862929 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939592040804 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121566804611 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108056924197 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949754088688 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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