Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader
Leadership has become a prominent part of social life which has engendered heated debate among academicians. Whether a person born as a leader or everyone can be a leader. While most people think that being a leader determine by DNA, others hold the opposite perspective. I think being a leader is not a genetic factor, as a result, everyone can be a good leader. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborate on my points of view.
The most noticeable reason is that leadership is a skill which can be learned like any other skills such as having self-confidence, making relationship or management. If you ask a prosperous leader, how he becomes a leader, absolutely he would not say that he was born by a set of gifts. Instead, they tell you the stories about their hardworking and focused effort. For being a leader you just need to practice and put your time to gain experience. This is a price that you should pay to be a leader. For example, in this decade Japenes has become renown because they become an excellent leader. Because their education system pays attention to teach the student how to be a leader in their first 3 years of schools. It obviously indicates that everyone can b leader by struggle and deliberate practicing.
In addition, history shows that there is no impossible for humans. Human beings can even do the hardest work in the work and turn the dreams into reality. Learning how to be a leader is another possible aim of every human which can be achieved. For example, when I was in the high school it was hard for me to be a leader of a group. This made me frustrated but I talk to my teacher who told me there is no impossible for humans you just need to try. Thus, I learn how to b leader by studying book and gaining experience in this field. Now I am the leader of my own company which I owe to my teacher. If you want to be a leader just make it as a goal and try to achieve it.
Another prominent reason which deserved some words here is that there is no evidence that leadership is in human DNA. Leaders are self-made not an inherited characteristic. A survey on this topic in England has been done recently. Researcher probe into human DNA to find out whether it can determine social characteristic like leadership. But they assert that being a leader is not the result of genetic, thus, there is no difference between all people for being a leader.
To conclude, maybe being a leader can be a result of genetic factors and environmental influences, however, I personally think that everyone can be a leader by learning it. I highly recommend that focus on being a leader as a goal to gain it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...dership is a skill which can be learned like any other skills such as having self-co...
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Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ecause they become an excellent leader. Because their education system pays attention t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 15.1003584229 232% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52830188679 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73084596797 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477987421384 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4752115728 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1428571429 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0357142857 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305856985689 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983456329986 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733394836963 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214317340577 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320447561297 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.