Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader
Leadership skill can play a large role person's life such as development career. In my view, it is not a magical ability to guide and influence people, it requires knowledge. So I believe that people are able to become a leader by training because of following reasons.
First, leading skills like any other skills are required to train several specific techniques. For instance, communication and group management skills are well-known traits of a leader. These techniques can be taught even in school when children playing or working in a group of their friends. It allows children to develop their leadership skill through how to relationship with the other children. It would be the first step to making children ready a leadership role in the future. Therefor, I believe that people can learn to be a leader.
Second, everyone can acquire new skill with having enough practice, so everyone can be a leader by practicing. I remember when I worked in my university laboratory, my supervisor always had problem with his students. He couldn't control his students and talking bad behind his back. He was so disappointment because he almost losing his job. He decided to see a counsellor. After some days my supervisor changed behavior toward his students. Every day he practices counsellor recommendations. As a result, less than a month he could control his class.
To conclude, may some people have Innate Qualities of Professional Leadership, but I believe that every think is possible for human and everyone can be a leader with learning and practice leadership skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43243243243 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93231995534 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4837186755 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1666666667 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3888888889 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16620894972 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053492716374 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742286983183 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120778869406 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740866409529 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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