Life is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children.
Life has changed significantly during the last decades, and we all feel those changes. At the same time, it is generally agreed that the relevant changes may be defined as improvements. Personally, I believe that life is much more easier and comfortable nowadays as compared to the living conditions of our grandparents. I hold this opinion for three main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, technology has developed to the level that allows us /to/ solve everyday problems more effectively. At present, we may rely on technological machines and devices in merely all spheres of our lives. For example, computers help us study and work easier since their /its/ functions substitute our efforts significantly. Thus, we do not have to write by hand or remember much information as computers do that instead of us.
Also, we became financially more independent. There are a lot of opportunities to earn living and to live comfortable life. In past, our grandparents were limited in their possibilities to find a job. The life was dictating its conditions and they had to accomodate with them. In contrast, the development in all spheres of life makes possible for each person to find his or her own way of self-realization and comfortable living. For instance, there are a lot of new types of occupation that were unknown in past. Thus, according to relevant surveys, 30 per cent /percent/ of people in our country are involved in jobs related to the IT sphere. There are a lot of other spheres that involve more and more employees every day.
Finally, the medicine has developed seriously during the last decades. Nowadays, it is much more easier to get qualified health services than it was before. Consequently, people have more comfortable life and more chances to live longer. My uncle's experience is a compelling example of this. He has a serious illness, and he struggles for his life for a long period of time. However, thanks to new medicaments his life is more comfortable than it would be in the past. Moreover, he has a chance to recover, which was impossible twenty years ago /before/.
To sum up briefly, it is a fact that we live better nowadays compared to the life of our ancestors. Its explanation is threefold: we live in the era of technological innovations, we earn easier and more, and we have more chances to live a healthier life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...Personally, I believe that life is much more easier and comfortable nowadays as compared to...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...rn living and to live comfortable life. In past, our grandparents were limited in their...
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Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...w types of occupation that were unknown in past. Thus, according to relevant surveys, 3...
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Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...country are involved in jobs related to the IT sphere. There are a lot of other sphere...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... the last decades. Nowadays, it is much more easier to get qualified health services than i...
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Line 4, column 359, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...nd he struggles for his life for a long period of time. However, thanks to new medicaments his...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, consequently, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in contrast, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87223587224 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97126070049 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528255528256 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5458395987 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.32 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.28 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336846800793 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08784587947 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765544911599 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177472476909 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683726983451 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.