Life today is easier and comfortable than the childhood of your grandparents.
Do you agree or disagree?
With the significant development of technology, life in the contemporary world got more comfortable and adequate. I assume that if we compare our lives with those who lived in the past, it is quite straightforward that we have the advantage over those people, and this concept will gradually change with the upcoming generations. To my mind, there are abundant amount of reasons for why our lives are much more superior than the lives of those people who lived in the past.
Firstly, I think, the main concept which makes our daily life better, is the internet. As we all know, in the period of our grandparents childhood, the technology was not developed enough, and they did not have internet nor some other technological devices, which we are using in daily basis. Consequently, it is obvious that as a society, we can not live without the existance of internet. Because, while we are engaged in our tasks, we utilize the internet in all of the fields, just to decrease the effort and time which has to be implemented. However, in the past, it was very challenging to accomplish tasks on time, which were associated with the information gathering or in some other fields.
Secondly, I consider our lives, much more stable, in comparison to childhood of my grandparents. The main reason for this is that in their times, our country was ruled by the Soviet Union, and as a society, we did not have our independence. Moreover, our country gained freedom in the recent decades. Conversely, we have opened our eyes, in a country where we have our own independence, freedom of speech, and democratic rules. I consider these aspects, as a very essential concept in a life of an individual, and this gives us the advantage over our grandparents.
Thirdly, nowadays, we have lots of opportunities in variety of fields. Indeed, this concept shows a great difference between our generations, and it makes our lives much more prestigious in comparison to their lives. To my mind, the best advantage that we have, because of the opportunities, is the significant development of education. Consequently, with the high growth of the education system we have lots of chances in life. Thus, while being engaged with the variety of opportunities, we can build ourselves as a highly intellectual individuals in life.
In conclusion, I consider our lives much more superior than our grandparents childhood, and I expect this chain reaction to continue with the new generations which will come to replace us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 363, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...rations. To my mind, there are abundant amount of reasons for why our lives are much m...
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Line 1, column 408, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
...t of reasons for why our lives are much more superior than the lives of those people who lived in ...
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Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...n our tasks, we utilize the internet in all of the fields, just to decrease the effort and...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
...n conclusion, I consider our lives much more superior than our grandparents childhood, and I expec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, as to, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95465393795 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01359692918 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472553699284 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4803628072 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.263157895 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0643096096747 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274719094482 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337506884336 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436969895957 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135033715548 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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