Distance learning and online computer classes should replace classroom learning.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s his or her own right to get education.Nowadays, we have variety of methods of getting ...
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...ick how and where to get education from.The education is the most essential concept...
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Suggestion: Everyday
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...n our daily life, and with these changes,our education methods develop too.With this...
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...g, started to implement in some schools.Some may consider this as a significant educ...
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...d to implement in some schools.Some may consider this as a significant education system,...
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...and get basic education, which you need.Conversely, i assume that the rewards, which are a...
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...d in the classrooms are more worthwhile.I strongly refute the concept of gaining ...
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...education from online learning programs.The main reason which makes me to support t...
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...ich is not available in online learning.This concept is emotion, and watching others...
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... others actions towards specific events.While we go to the school, we can get enormou...
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... not accessible in the online education.For example, we can make lots of friends in...
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... so we can acquire lots of satisfaction.Besides the emotions, i think the education in ...
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...on in real classrooms are much superior.Because the concept of seeing teacher in front ...
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...dditional responsibility and importance.This factor makes old-school learning even m...
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...e.This factor makes old-school learning even more essential.To my mind, when a stude...
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...old-school learning even more essential.To my mind, when a student gets education ...
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...ility of learning or doing the homework.In contrast, at the school, students feel ...
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...and importance of making their homework.The main reason for this is that they do no...
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... classmates, which are in the classroom.Thus, almost everytime they try to accomplis...
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..., just to not be the source of laughter.In conclusion, i think these factors make ...
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...e the source of laughter.In conclusion, i think these factors make conventional l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, conversely, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2961038961 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44388943359 2.67179642975 129% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 385.0 20.1344086022 1912% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2039.0 100.406767564 2031% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 385.0 20.6045352989 1869% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 129.0 5.45110844103 2366% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161527329846 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161527329846 0.076458572812 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161527329846 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 196.0 11.7677419355 1666% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -319.3 58.1214874552 -549% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 153.4 10.1575268817 1510% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.94 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.79 8.01818996416 334% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 10.002688172 590% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 156.0 10.0537634409 1552% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 156.0 10.247311828 1522% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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