Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
The life situation adapted to the time that people live in. I think it is true to claim that life becomes easier and more comfortable in comparison with the past because of some reasons that I will mention.
The first reason is about the betterment of medicine situation in a modern life. The majority of the people died with light diseases. In fact, the lack of the knowledge and requirements drug let the diseases overwhelmed people. Also, another example of the absence of medicine science is dying of baby when they were born. On the contrary, today by the development of science and discovering of new and useful drug the number of the people that die from diseases reduces. So, the first difference of modern life is the advancement of the health situation of people.
Secondly, the emergence of technology is one of the unique altered. Nowadays, the people lives completely depend on the technology such as cars, televisions, the internet, and the others. Each of them eases one part of humans’ lives. For example, the car assists the people to transfer so easily, or the internet makes the connection so easier. So, the technology makes a modern life completely unlike from the past because it reduces the problems such as transformation, connection, and the others that are a vital part of people's daily lives.
Finally, increases the job opportunity. By enhancement of education, the people’s knowledge and skills develop. Originally, these two cases are vital for finding a job. The most important part is, arising a new job such engineering or psychology and the others. So, by the development of people’s knowledge, the job occasion increases.
In conclusion, invention such as techcology tools and detection such as medicine and new drugs are the obvious arguments to prove this claim that new and modern life totally changes and makes more uncomplicated and convenience in comparion with our grandfather’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12852664577 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00071236911 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514106583072 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 13.0 3.08781362007 421% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9462543831 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1052631579 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121409221343 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325607872921 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441288873095 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745016906874 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585299553425 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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