Many filmmakers made movie based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other people choose to watch movie first. What do you think?
Knowledge and culture can spread through both visual medias and books. Vivid pictures on screens and impressive lines printed in books are all excellent channels for people to relax and learn knowledge. The movies is a main way of visual media. A large variety of movies are produced on the basis of books. Some people advocate to read books before watching films, while other people prone to watch movies first. Personally, I prefer to watch a move before reading the book.
To begin with, movies are produced elabratly. They are short, only about two hours. As they need to express the main content of a thick book, most unnecessary portions are condensed. Faced with the fierce competition, modern citizens are struggle with their work, and they have a little time to do other things, let alone to read a long book. Movies become the best choice for them whenever they want to relax. If a person is really interested in a movie which is made based on a book, he can read the book after watching the movie when he has leisure time. On the contray, if the movie is boring or meaningless, there is no need to waste his time to read the book. Movies provide the opportunity for people to decide whether or not to probe deeper into books.
Besides, movies also render us a superior visual and sound enjoyment. Few things can be more magical than enjoying a movie in a movie theater. The application of advanced techniques in computers makes the pictures on screens more real and vivid. Watching the characters on a gaint screen helps us better appreciate the cinematography and makes us feel we are genuinely part of the story. The booming surround sound further enhances that effect, not to mention the soundtracts are always pleasantly clearer. Aside from those blessings, we share our viewing experience- the joy, sorrow, anger, excitement, or thirll and sensation, with a large audience.
Admittedly, books can equip readers with creative ideas and rich imaginations. People can hardly feel the literal essence of a book by watching the same movie. However, watching movie is more suitable for moden people. Considering the limited time for busy human beings, along with the wonderful experience movies bringing to people, watching movie before reading a book will definitly moden citizens’ first choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...o relax and learn knowledge. The movies is a main way of visual media. A large var...
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Line 3, column 719, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...de the opportunity for people to decide whether or not to probe deeper into books. Besides...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her or not to probe deeper into books. Besides, movies also render us a superio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, really, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96658097686 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57504002824 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575835475578 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9094316414 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2083333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.79166666667 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452282358252 0.236089414692 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123584893018 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11411648624 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278744922287 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128164016939 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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