Life is complicated. To lead a happy and easier life in modern-day, it is important to have money. Of course, earning money is difficult but money can change your life and your destiny. With a large amount of money, you can do whatever you want such as you can travel, you can buy luxury products and you can also donate it.
First of all, there is a proverb called- "Money can not buy happiness'. Although I agree with the claim of the proverb, money can help to bring happiness. In the modern world, it is hard to live without money. You can buy modern goods like televisions, smartphones, airplanes and so on, but they are not cheap. In order to buy this one must have a lot of money. Another example about how money important is that sometimes, it helps to bring comforts like to buy an air-conditioner or a luxury car.
With the innovation of modern transportations and technologies, nowadays, it is possible to travel to a new country but it needs a lot of money. For instance, to travel Europe or the Euro zone for one week, you need minimum thousand euros plus air tickets. Travel is something that brings happiness to our life. For this reason, I think a large amount of money is important.
Finally, life is short. We need to think about other human beings around the world. There are a lot of people living hungry in developing countries in Asia and Africa. People are dying there for the food. For this, I think every wealthy man should donate his/her money and to help them you need to earn a lot of money. In our world, many billionaire like Bile Gates, Ambani are donating their money to help them.
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- TOEFL T P O 12 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, for instance, i think, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53401360544 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5471648869 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3466759399 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.65 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160392866065 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556677614483 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536884941983 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103011707515 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019994153444 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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