many people believe that it is very important to make money while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable thing analyze each view point and take a stand . give specific reason and example for your position .
Nowadays it does not matter we believe it or not money is everything, although it is not God but it can fulfill all of you wishes. Some people want to make more and more money and there are still persons who believe there is a God and stay happy in little amount they earn. In the following essay I intend to put my arguments to support my views.
My major argument is that the people who always want to make money they do not have any feelings. Insipte of this fact the dollars can make any one emotion less and any there is no differnce between right and wrong. For instance, when i was in high school one of my friend stated to sell the drugs, i told him numerous times that is not the right thing you are much way better for doing this but he did not stop. Moreover, he goes on and on and now he is in jail. I feel so lousy about him and when I see his parents crying it breaks my heart apart.
On the other hand, God exist whether you believe it or not,there are many people who learn to be patient on what they have. In my life I have seen such angels, their children do not had foos to eat which can lead to serious health issues. In addition, their souls are free from all the guilts. For example, my maid works 12 hours a day for me on a minimum pay and she has 4 children to feed but she never complains about her crisis. To believe on hard work is were rare, all human beings are in search of a short cut for money which is not fascinating.
In conclusion, given all the pros and cons about earing average income and the desire of more. In my opinion to be statisfied internally is valuable than to have money with no happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0866873065 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10447080336 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560371517028 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0682069911 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128683039944 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404811010408 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414457529574 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741731018515 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033490245753 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 10.9000537634 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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