Many people suffer from home sick when they first arrive at a new place. Which of the following method is the most effective to relieve?
1, to cook home-made food or participate in other activities at home.
2, keep in touch with the people at home
3, to eat local food or participate in other activities at the new place.
People exploit several ways to relieve about homesickness, While some people will sometime cook homemade food or join in other activities at home if they feel home sick, some keep contacting with the people at their home. Moreover, others bring the decision to eat local food or participate in other activities at the new place. In my view, the most effective method is that people should make opportunities to learn about the new place by eating local food or join in other activities. It will be so beneficial for them to create new places where they are able to comfort, focus on new lifestyles, and be an enjoyable person for their new life.
To begin with, people who feel homesick are capable of establishing new comfortable places with local food and other activities at a new place. When people get homesick, they are apt to worry about their new lifestyles such as their friends, food, housing, and so on. This emotion can be banished by new experiences. For instance, one man has to move to another country from his home town. After he stays at three months, he keeps missing friends from his home countries. Nevertheless, once he hangs out with local people to go outside for eating local food, these local people often become one of his relievable people. As a result, his homesickness will gradually diminish in this situation.
Secondly, homesick will vanish from people’s feelings by focusing on new styles. People completely earn the habitats of new places when they participate in activities. At the new place, the customs are so different from their home countries where people lived. It also changes their mind to more fresh. Eventually, people can concentrate on their new life. Therefore, people certainly are able to ease their homesick.
Finally, people will be ready to enjoy their new life for comforting homesick about new places by eating new food and experiencing new activities. The type of people who feel homesick does not spend enough time on actions such as taking their time with local people, walking local streets, and joining in local events, and on. From these movements, they obviously can detect favorable friends and places. Take myself as an example, I took homesick when I studied abroad in Utah states. One day, my local friend picked up me to go to see a beautiful mountain named Glen canyon. This place suddenly becomes one of my favorite places where I continued to go for clearing homesick.
To sum up, people should eat local food or experience local events for decreasing their homesickness. They can acquire benefits such as constricting new comfortable places, making concentrations for new lifestyles, and preparing fitting in new life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9955654102 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66756887768 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49889135255 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2774163655 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.12 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.04 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.48 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368438702597 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116451151833 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111227713959 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243920904731 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137319866587 0.0645574589148 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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