Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
For many people, one of the activities that a foreign visitor must do when he visited a new place is going to the museum and the central market. I believe it for two reasons. First, due to the fact that museums are the depiction of the history of the countries. Moreover, strange people in a new place can understand more about the advances and discoveries in this place, increasing their knowledge.
First and foremost, for many experts in culture, the museums are the best icon of the countries' history because of it depicts different stages of the national history. For instance, museums in Peru depicts about the earliest settlers, especially about their Inca culture and wars. In this sense, foreign visitors can explore and learn more about the place where they are visiting.
Another important reason is that exists another kind of museum, and they are aimed at science and advances in the country. These museums are essential due to the fact that provides foreign people with different current knowledge on the last advancements in science and technology. For example, The Science and Technology Museum in Chile which is the first interactive museum to be created in this country, aimed at making known science and technology as a support for teaching. In this way, new people in this country can explore and experiment while they are meeting more the different museums.
In sum, it is a good idea and a crucial point to go a museum of history, social or science when people are in a new place. In this sense, I would recommend to others, spend a couple of hours to visit museums because of not only meet a new location in this country but also win essential and valuable knowledge for their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...e, the museums are the best icon of the countries history because of it depicts different...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...science when people are in a new place. In this sense, I would recommend to others...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81355932203 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52162380482 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494915254237 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3777491023 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247382253239 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923067969032 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054992000632 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161878778335 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471393892128 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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