Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One famous phrase about a healthy lifestyle is "sport is life," and it is so right, that is because it has a positive impact in our lifestyle especially on the younger. I strongly believe that the best advantage of children practicing sports is that improve their health and it encourages them to be disciplined in all aspects of their life, in spite of the amount of time that it requires and the
From the one side, there are grounds to believe that is positive for children spend long hours practicing sports instead of doing irrelevant activities. One of the most remarkable benefits is that practice sports can shape the children's values such as discipline, work hard and resilience. For instance, I remember all my childhood practicing different sports, especially triathlon, and it makes me a disciplined person in all aspects of my life. And in turn, it helps me to maintain a healthy lifestyle regardless of living in a chaotic society with youth problems such as drugs or vandalism.
From the other side, the fact that children spending many hours practicing sports instead of study could be negative that is because the opportunity cost of has extended sessions of training is high. For example, children could lose hours at school because of they need to practice sports for some competition. In this sense, it is crucial parents encourage their children to be responsible with all the obligations at school or home and also spend a long of time training because it will contribute their children's integral development.
In sum, I firmly believe that the advantages overweigh the disadvantages and us, as an older people, must encourage our children to choose practice different sports for an amount of time because it will be beneficial on all various aspects of their lives such as their health, strength their values and be good citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...healthy lifestyle is 'sport is life,' and it is so right, that is because it...
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Line 1, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... amount of time that it requires and the From the one side, there are grounds to ...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...le, children could lose hours at school because of they need to practice sports for some compet...
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Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to practice'
Suggestion: to practice
..., must encourage our children to choose practice different sports for an amount of time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02250803859 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81756069624 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488745980707 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.9493103557 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.555555556 100.406767564 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5555555556 20.6045352989 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208617278804 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874637167492 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665613412889 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136202702939 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032188528095 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 11.7677419355 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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