The most effective ways for the government to conserve energy is to increase the price of gasoline and electricity

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The most effective ways for the government to conserve energy is to increase the price of gasoline and electricity

Submitted by farnaz_E on Thu, 10/11/2018 - 15:26

Today, different kind of energy has vital role in people's life. Thanks to different kind of energy sources, public transportation, trade, communication and so forth have been rapidly revolutionized. Day by day, governments have to try to extract more fossil fuel or build new power station to increase the produce of electricity. Some countries export energies and the others import to their countries. So, it is crucial for both exporting and importing countries to conserve energy. In this way, the countries that buy energy can reduce their dependency to those countries that trade with energy and the seller countries can decrease their internal consume and increase the amount of their exported energy. There is a lot of solutions to diminish the amount of energy usage and among all those ways, strategy of increasing the fee of gasoline and electricity is more beneficial for governments. Because, it is the easiest strategy and besides, it hasn't expenses for them. In my opinion, this policy is the faster way to conserve energy for next generations.
First, diminish consumption of energy through elevate the cost of gasoline and electricity, forced people to review their energy usage style and find out ways to decrease their usage. Because, it is hard for most people to put most of their salary just for electricity and gasoline. For example, when my government decided to increase the cost of the electricity, I decided to change lights of my home and use low consumption lump to reduce my electricity expenses. So, if all people can manage their consumption, not only they can save more money but also the government can conserve more electricity.
Second, the policy of saving energy by increase the fee, encourage people to switch to renewable energy sources such as solar energy. These energy sources have lots of benefits for both people and governments. Renewable energy can reduce the dependency of people's life to some fossil fuels which are the first causes of air pollution. For example, because of high electricity cost in my country, my friend decided to use solar cell package to keep her house warm in winter. It can be predictable that, if every citizen choose the way that my friend, the government can save a great amount of electricity and gasoline in each year.
In summary, increasing the cost of some source of energy such as gasoline and electricity, is a best policy that help governments to save more energy. Because, it force people to reduce their usage by improving their culture of energy usage and also shifting to renewable energy sources. I strongly believe that, increasing the cost of electricity and gasoline is the most effective way to conserve more energy.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, for example, in summary, kind of, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2264.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04231625835 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75047293453 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449888641425 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5246360502 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.80952381 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.380952381 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390081132637 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127087416745 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871947438692 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277825763667 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494069001832 0.0645574589148 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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