a nation should require all of its students to study the national curriculum until they enter college
Students are the pillor of nation development; Today's students are the skilled manpower of tomorrow. education is the foundation of nation. education gain by the student depends upon the national curriculum.school is the crucial period students as it is has great role for the enrollment of university. in my view, student shouldn't required to study the same curriculum until they enter the university in order to prepare skilled manpower,utilize the local source and uniform distribution of population.
first of all, curriculum should be based in according to the state. Nation should do the research about the state about its characteristics;what is famous for ? curriculum should be designed according to it's famousness.for example, if any place is famous for production of paddy(rice) then curriculum should be designed according to the paddy production. students will make base about it in the school then do complete study in the university which helps to prepare the skilled manpower for that state as well as other state. in the similar manner it should be design in other state.
secondly, using the local product can be beneficial for the economical growth of the local people; as they produce the material necessary for their daily life. moreover,they can export the material to the other state and earn money. For an instance, jhapa(district of nepal ) is famous for paddy and if the curriculum is designed according to it then there will be skilled manpower. farming is done in innovative way so raft of paddy is produce and they can sell it and earn money.
finally, if the people are employed in their own state then they will not migrate from one state another state so there will not be crowed in any state. for example , kathamandu is most populted city in nepal because people from different state come in search of oppotunities; however, if there will be availability of the employment, eductaion, health service and other facilities then pople will not migrate then makes any city populted.
In recapitulation, i strongly believe that if the curriculum is designed according to state rather than nation as a whole. so that they augment their knowlede by doing research in university. Also there will not be conflict in choosing the subject and specilized the field of study.
- a nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 58
- To understand the most important characteristics of society, one must study its major cities 50
- a nation should require all of its students to study the national curriculum until they enter college 60
- to understand the most important characteristics of the society one must study its major cities 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12234042553 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98095444702 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460106382979 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.97927699 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257715421305 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951951105424 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075327135547 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151241461823 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128683635869 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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