By and Large, movies or films shows lot of impact on the modern society. At present, most of the people were lacking interest on reading books, this is due to several reasons like time consumption and undertanding the language. In my opinion, I will prefer to watch movie than reading a book. I support my discussion with some examples and experiences from my past life.
To begin with, movies are so interesting to watch and we feel some sort of relaxation. For instance, we are gaining knowledge through the movie as well, we remember the story for a longer time because some characters will be fixed in our mind along with the dialogues they spoke and when the situation comes we use those dialogues in daily life also. Personally, I like to watch movies and I remember lot of stories. I used to repeat the dialouges in routine life whenever the situation appears.For example, In the movie 'Hobbit' there is a character named Gollum who use to say "precious" I like the diction he deliver that word and I used say that word repeatedly in everyday life. On the other hands, reading books is a good habit which improves our concentration and strengthens our language skills, but it consumes lot of time and we may not have better understanding since we are not experts in those particular languages in which those books were written.
Secondly, movie or films are made to eduaction and entertainment as well, so we won't feel bored to watch movie. Sometimes we will get involved into the story immense deeply. Nowadays most of the young generation who live in hostels especially, busy with studies and they don't have time to talk to others. Movies, inturn providing some good feel to them and they bring some togetherness among friendsto watch movie all together. Later, they were able to stay focus on studies without getting frustrated on subject. However, it is better to read a book before sleeping. Since, watching movies at late night can create dizziness and headache in morning. We may not concentrate on our work and also creates imbalances in our health issues.
In addition to this, movies or films won't cost much, there are so many websites in which we can go through online watch the movie for free. Some websites provide lot of movie will less amount to pay as a subscriptions for a limited time. In fact, we can download movies and watch them through electronic gatgets like laptop or smart phone whenever we are free. The most advantageous thing movies consumes less space in laptop. Whereas, books were so heavy to carry and it costs too much to purchase. We have to rely on ebooks in which all books may not be available for free. To the best of my knowledge there are lot of websites for online movies than ebooks.
Finally, movies serves greater advantage by saving money and time. We can understand better and remember the stories for longer time. They provide entertainment and education, but not good for health if we watch at late nights. Reading books is a good habit. Books also provide knowledge but it takes lot of time to understand for beginners. Books are heavier to carry and it costs a lot. Reading books provide good health if we read a book before sleep.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...es we use those dialogues in daily life also. Personally, I like to watch movies and...
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Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ine life whenever the situation appears.For example, In the movie Hobbit there is a...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...t there is a character named Gollum who use to say 'precious' I like the ...
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Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'delivers'.
Suggestion: delivers
...os;precious' I like the diction he deliver that word and I used say that word repe...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... especially, busy with studies and they dont have time to talk to others. Movies, in...
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Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a subscription' or simply 'subscriptions'?
Suggestion: a subscription; subscriptions
...lot of movie will less amount to pay as a subscriptions for a limited time. In fact, we can dow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, sort of, by and large, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2651.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 559.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74239713775 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61897709606 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.0 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7008829711 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5161290323 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0322580645 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45161290323 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311276458506 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094452154254 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837097900406 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194579209203 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376387690515 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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