o you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
I agree that young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives today than young people in the past. My reason is that knowledge and money are the most important factors when making decisions, and young people today don’t depend on parents to acquire them. Besides, if they need more advice, they ask friends rather than parents.
In the first place, nowadays young people acquire knowledge easier than young men did in the past, so they are better able to make decisions about their own lives. For example, the internet is well developed today, and young people use the internet to get a huge amount of information regarding their questions. Once they have enough information young people can make decisions immediately. In contrast, twenty years ago, people had fewer resources to gain knowledge. The main resources included newspaper and TV programs, which provided very limited information compared to the internet. Consequently, the knowledge and experience of elder people were very important so young people at the time relied on their parents to make decisions.
In addition, young people today are more financially independent and as a result, they are cable of making decisions about their own lives without financial support from their parents. For example, many schools provide programs that allow students earn money by taking part-time jobs. Also, there are many scholarships for which students can apply to attend colleges. However, in the past, students had no financial support from other than their parents, so they must accept their parents’ advice when making decisions. That is, financial independence enables students to make decisions based on their own willingness nowadays.
Last but not least, nowadays young generation relies on friends more than on the parents to make decisions. To be more specific, modern kids make friends in their early childhood and they spend most of the time hanging out with friends. As a consequence, friends have a big impact on how they think. In other words, the weight of their parents’ words becomes less. Nevertheless, a few decades ago children spent most of the time with parents because they did not have the chance to go to school. Therefore, parents played a major role when their kids made decisions.
In conclusion, I believe that young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them in the past. Today, young generation plays the main role in making decisions about their own lives, because they are able to acquire the information they need by themselves, and they don’t have to rely on their parents for money. Furthermore, friends have a bigger impact on modern kids since they are little.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in other words, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16930022573 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59846378135 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458239277652 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1638342193 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5652173913 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2608695652 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30434782609 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.525803836239 0.236089414692 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176631736189 0.076458572812 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176655304776 0.0737576698707 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354141090455 0.150856017488 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116257808306 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.