One should never judge a person by external appearances
A beautiful physical appearance is appreciated by everyone but most of the times this is just a mask that can hide terrifying personality traits. Why people knowing this, still get deceived by physical traits and don’t pay much attention to the personality? It’s just human nature to be attracted to someone or something beautiful which appeals to the eyes. However, physical traits can’t be considered accomplishments by an individual, they were just inherited from their parents. How can people admire and praise someone just because of how they look?
If a person is beautiful it doesn’t necessarily mean he/she is kind or vice versa.
I consider that a person shouldn’t judge someone else based on their external appearance because they will be wrong.
First, physical appearance can be misleading. For instance, a person considered ,,ugly’’ could have stronger moral values than someone who society labels as beautiful. Furthermore, a good-looking person can be mean and narcissist. Some people are so self-centered and just because they have other people’s admiration, they become narcissists and feel superior to others.
Second, nowadays due to makeup and plastic surgery, people can change the way they look. Many people do that just to have the recognition and appraisal of society. Society imposes certain beauty standards that are unthinkable. Some people get frustrated and they’re not happy with how they look and apply to makeup and in extreme cases to plastic surgery. They do it so people will stop judging them but this just shows how much they are insecure and vulnerable other people’s opinion.
This is due to the fact that people tend to judge by physical appearance.
Third, some people tend to date and marry people that are attractive and overlook other qualities. Beauty vanishes with ageing, but personality remains. So how these people will deal with their rushed decision which they made when they were young?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, so, still, third, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39936102236 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97582182266 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549520766773 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0650929501 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.65 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1040447547 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432388069405 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582762620661 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793784955707 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688999668318 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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