Time is a valuable resource that, unfortunately, is irreversible. People need to use it wisely in order to succeed in life and the best method to do it efficiently is by planning and organizing. It would be considerate if people started practicing this measure at a young age and voluntarily because outside influence doesn't have the desired outcomes. Modern life is indeed very complex due to ongoing requirements, deadlines and stressing schedules. Youth need to accustomize to this environment and start planning and organizing their lives at early ages for several reasons.
First,the progress of technology is an impediment to complete tasks in everyday life and the only way to fight this is by planning. High school students and college students tend to get distracted a lot by social media platforms and their school or college performance suffers because of it. They tend to procrastinate and don't complete their assignments on time or they don't do them at all. This situation occurs because students don't know to balance their free time and their duties.It's a matter of priority but if they planned how much time to dedicate to studying and to their free time, they wouldn't have to face so many challenges.
Second, there are myriads of applications that blocks other widgets for a specified amount of time. Even though students may have to use the internet on the phone for research purposes, they won't be distracted or bothered. Furthermore, students often face problems with preparing for exams due to their loose schedule. The preparation starts before the day of the exam and they don't get the desired grades. If they planned to study tiny bits of information each day, their performance would be outstanding.
Third, in order to apply for colleges young people need to plan what grades to have,if they have to engage in extra-curricular activities and their applications deadline is important too. Grades are crucial for college applications and diligent students are aware of this. In order to get enrolled in a prestigious college, preparation starts in the first year of high school for ambitious students. Go-getters made good use of planning since they were in high school and they made it a habit. This only benefited them and their careers prospects.
To sum up, young people are the ones who struggle the most with time management. It's paramount for them to learn to plan and organize their times. In order to succeed in life and reach their goals, they have to make a good use of time. Time is irreversible and it's our duty to wise it wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, third, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98611111111 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82194819803 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50462962963 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9054664147 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.652173913 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7826086957 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69565217391 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165701554318 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523605636676 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423657544401 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10710370809 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454331125275 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.