In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by apply2017 on Thu, 08/11/2016 - 17:16

News plays an essential role in our lives because it's the only way to know what's happening around you. Some thinks that internet is the best source of news. Some doen't agree and consider both TV, and internet as a good source of news. If you ask me, using multiple news channel and website is the best choice, and I have reasons for that.

First, many of the sources are not truthful. When you want to know the truth behind everything you hear, any source try to speak fo it's own profit. For instance, when the national TV channel of government reveals the statistics of economical status of the country, lies about the numbers, and change the news to whatever they like. On the other side, those websites on the internet which are against the government reveal the real statistics, and claim that the government has lied to you, and only they publish the reallity. So basically, reading many source of news help you to get the trueth.

Second, multiple sources give differnt number of a same news. The news channels always give different news because they are not sure what is the exact numbers of the occasions. For example, last year an airplane crashed, and fell down. At the first, the websites said one hundered persone died on that airplane but the TV said one hundered and fifty persone have lost their lives. In the end, no one knew what was the exact number. Everyone was shocked by the accident, but with differnt numbers being availabe, they all had arguments on the subject. Lots of families, whoes their relatives had been on the plane, were angry of the news, because they were very worry about their relatives. In a word if you want to be sure that you know the correct number, follow many reporter.

That is why I think reading many source of news is better than reading just one source, because of , they don't tell the reallity always, and many of them give different update of a same occasion. I think you'd better to select four or five source from internet and televison.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
News plays an essential role in our live...
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Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... an essential role in our lives because its the only way to know whats happening ar...
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Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... lives because its the only way to know whats happening around you. Some thinks that ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...choice, and I have reasons for that. First, many of the sources are not truth...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (TV) must be used with a third-person verb: 'channels'.
Suggestion: channels
...fit. For instance, when the national TV channel of government reveals the statistics of...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...of government reveals the statistics of economical status of the country, lies about the n...
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Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...tics, and claim that the government has lied to you, and only they publish the reall...
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Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sources'.
Suggestion: many sources
...ish the reallity. So basically, reading many source of news help you to get the trueth. ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of news help you to get the trueth. Second, multiple sources give differnt n...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'same news'.
Suggestion: same news
...ultiple sources give differnt number of a same news. The news channels always give differen...
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Line 5, column 768, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reporter seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reporters'.
Suggestion: many reporters
...hat you know the correct number, follow many reporter. That is why I think reading many ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orrect number, follow many reporter. That is why I think reading many source ...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sources'.
Suggestion: many sources
...orter. That is why I think reading many source of news is better than reading just one...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...than reading just one source, because of , they dont tell the reallity always, and...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ding just one source, because of , they dont tell the reallity always, and many of t...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...rent update of a same occasion. I think youd better to select four or five source fr...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'source' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sources'.
Suggestion: sources
...hink youd better to select four or five source from internet and televison.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'you know']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234413965087 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.15710723192 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0922693266833 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0249376558603 0.046263068375 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0623441396509 0.0685040099705 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114713216958 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0249376558603 0.0351676179071 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.24009089166 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0199501246883 0.0309702414327 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.117206982544 0.0887237588012 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0209618222197 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0149625935162 0.0139019557991 108% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2008.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 357.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62464985994 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288515406162 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224089635854 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.140056022409 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0700280112045 0.112833075102 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24009089166 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540616246499 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 59.0612146358 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7894736842 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7178126267 48.84282405 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.684210526 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.54480286738 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.1984372696 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.5306122449 1.45489161554 105% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133452293532 0.300154397459 44% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10923262992 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0850061606838 0.0752933317313 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.514291543953 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166572892327 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642306179741 0.114077575197 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424875541012 0.0781384742642 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.388698217799 0.336927656856 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.127945830887 0.067059652881 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10776823698 0.210909579961 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223073577326 0.0618886996521 36% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Sentence: When you want to know the truth behind everything you hear, any source try to speak fo it's own profit.
Error: fo Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: On the other side, those websites on the internet which are against the government reveal the real statistics, and claim that the government has lied to you, and only they publish the reallity.
Error: reallity Suggestion: reality

Sentence: So basically, reading many source of news help you to get the trueth.
Error: trueth Suggestion: truth

Sentence: Second, multiple sources give differnt number of a same news.
Error: differnt Suggestion: different

Sentence: At the first, the websites said one hundered persone died on that airplane but the TV said one hundered and fifty persone have lost their lives.
Error: persone Suggestion: person
Error: hundered Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: Everyone was shocked by the accident, but with differnt numbers being availabe, they all had arguments on the subject.
Error: differnt Suggestion: different
Error: availabe Suggestion: available

Sentence: Lots of families, whoes their relatives had been on the plane, were angry of the news, because they were very worry about their relatives.
Error: whoes Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: That is why I think reading many source of news is better than reading just one source, because of , they don't tell the reallity always, and many of them give different update of a same occasion.
Error: reallity Suggestion: reality

Sentence: I think you'd better to select four or five source from internet and televison.
Error: televison Suggestion: television

flaws:
Two reasons are similar:

First, many of the sources are not truthful.

Second, multiple sources give different number of a same news. //it means sources are not truthful either, like reason one.

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 359 350
No. of Characters: 1594 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.353 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.44 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.134 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.895 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.973 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.318 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5