organization charity and money help
Charitable organization are one of the most important association in the community. This organization trys to reach people that need any type of assistant. Donations either private or pesonal, howevere, are the essential supply for them. Some people when they donate prefer to supervise the organiztion on how they can distribute them. Others, leave this resposiblity to charity organization adminestration. Personally, I beive that if im going to donate, Charitable organization department are the one who have great aknowledment on how to distribute it, and there are two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To commence with, cahritable organization have a plan on community needs and how they can distibute it accordingly. most of people if they need help, they go to closest charity organization to address that issue and try to solve it. My personal experience is a compellig example of that. Yemen attacked by neigbours country since four years, since then, pelathora of people lose their jop and they are always looking for help. For that reasone, they went to charity organization to see if they could found food supplement or even medications. As a result, this organization started to address people need and announce that list internationally in order to get support from the world. A lot of people started to collect money and they send it to them. In turne, this organization take this money and they distribute it according to people needs, like some of them need food, some need medication, some need to travel and so on. As you can see, If we want to insist on organization to spend this money on goods and other service, we did not achived the goal of what this organization built for, because we restrict it is job.
Second, most of this organization located far away from people who support it financially. For example, I live in USA and the organization that i support them with money located in Yemen. So I do not have time to travel to Yemen in order to supervise this organization. even the ban on Yemen prevent any plan to land their. Howevere, alot of yemeni people sending money to charitable organization and they relay on them on how to distribute this financial aids. This experience taught me that we should relay on any charity organization whatevere their location are, becasue it built to help people and most od adminstrators are good people.
In sum, though may disagree with any charity organization to supervise the methods of disttributing helps to people, I prefer this organization to do that, not because they have their own plan on how they can arrange and spend this financial
help, but also most of them located far a way from peopl who are sponsored for such charity organization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hey can arrange and spend this financial help, but also most of them located far ...
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...ponsored for such charity organization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 8.0752688172 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93978494624 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92774512638 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.140287323 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.409090909 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1363636364 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32893204193 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105909802169 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823981861391 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212343869308 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510247940537 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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