College or university is crucial place for people for several reasons. Everyone can gain knowledge, get experience from there which help to build a good life or essential for building career. I think the given examples like new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge are obviously the basic reasons for attending college or university. But making friend, participating various activities like sports, social works, voluntary tasks also the reasons for getting involved in colleges or universities. I can elucidate my supporting reasons with some examples.
First of all, attending a college or university always is a new and great experience for everyone. On the other words, joining new college means new friends, new environment, new tasks and new responsibility. And meeting those new things help to gain new knowledge and experiences. A young child can come to know about the world for first as a new challenging perspective way. Because before college or university, they always get all help from their senior family members or parents. For instance, admitted a college was a great and wonderful experience. I was first time out of family because my college was almost 350 miles far from my house. But this was fabulous experience for me, because I had to do my own works own-self, need to meet some strange people. And I got some wonderful friends from college who always helped me to do my works and support all time. I also able to handle all challenge by facing the problems. So, I can say that attending college always help to get experience and knowledge. That's why people join in a college and university.
Secondly, university always play a role of catalyst of building a career on dream field. In broadly, university is a global place to learn everything and it will help to gain them. One has to only choose a sector as his desire because there is available every sector you want. Various people are working on different fields in university. You will always able to find someone on your interested field to help you. For example, during my university life, I saw different people with different interest. And they were able to gain their goals including me. I was passionate in computer engineering and wanted to become a software engineer. Now I am a software engineer. Not only for me, I saw my friends becoming first class officer, film director, singer, athlete, teacher, police officer and so on. Therefore, we can tell that it helps to build one career by attending a university.
To sum up, some may think that without attending a college or university one can build a good career. But it is easy way to build up a career by getting degree from a college or university. Not only this a college or university help to make new friends, give opportunities to attain various new experiences and knowledge. So, people join in a university or colleges to know the world and making their life wonderful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2446.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92152917505 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82335994294 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470824949698 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 790.2 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9091890398 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4375 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.53125 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 27.0 11.8709677419 227% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409492286903 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108647386556 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958217234975 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274673117676 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084682638971 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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