People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experience, career preparation, and increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Almost people in the world would like to study in the campus or the university to several reasons. In my opinions, i think that we choose to enroll in the university with the 3 reasons: make more chance for the best job, build increase modern skill and arrange before start a career.
To begin with, many students think that they should apply the best company and get the highest salary. However, abundant companies or industries would require the good behavior students and high grade point average (GPA) in order to be employees of companies. Actually, most companies have to interview many applicants, so the companies have to compare for the grade and behavior between interview. In other hand, if some applicants does not graduated from university, they may miss opportunity in the company although they are good attitude and more experience. That is why the university is more important the careers and salary rates.
Without a doubt, the education can increase ability and skillfulness to learner. For example, in the electronic engineering lab, the lectures have to make plentiful modern worksheets in several topics such as semiconductor, resistance, capacitor and electricity so as to increase more skill of students. have As a result, students always get new knowledge and actual practical. For this reason, the college and university can improve skill of students and update technical information in order to use the real life and business.
Finally, studying in the college is the first step for career preparation. Numerous students in the college hope that they is going to work in the companies, so they have to concentrate in the class and make more training to make ready understanding before they will start the work. For instance, the students in the computer engineering should understand the algorithm which is process thinking in the part programming. Exactly, almost programming companies expect that the new employee should understand the algorithm and syntax of programming language by the company does not waste money for training again.
All in all, as I discussed above, I can safely draw the conclusion that studying in the college or university can help many students to increase chance for the job, to improve skill, to prepare beginning job and to help successful in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, if, may, so, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18037135279 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79487249415 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509283819629 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6487362617 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0625 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235065308132 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815365827564 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595735302623 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13116607344 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344707671362 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.