People attend college or university for different reasons such as career, knowledge, specializes in a perticular matter or sometimes experiace new things.
First of all, I think people go to college to gain knowledge. people can learn different kinds of knowledge in college or university. In there, they can learn about human history, politics, foreign language, business studies, engineering, science and so on. And, in this way, they learn how the earth worked and how the world worked. For instance with the knowledge of science people can learn about how living like works, basic principles of earth, ecosystem, and by the knowledge of enginnering, they can learn how to apply those science stuff and make the world easier and easy. Surely, attending college or university will improve knowledge.
Secondly, nowadays the minimum requirement for any general job is to have an honors degree. For this reason, people attain college or university to have a degree and have a good job for a better life. For example in Bangladesh, to become a BCS Cadre which is a competitive examination for the genaral government job, one must have a bachelor honors degree. In this aspect, every student much have minimum education and by attending those colleges or university they can learn a lot from those institutions and have their dream job.
Finally, I think, everyone is interested or passionate about different topics. Some might find in science whereas some might find interest in engineering, politics, language, law, history, planning, governance or other particular topics. For this reason, they should know the basics of those respective topics basic knowledge. For instance, if someone interested in law and wants to practice law in the future, he/she should attend the school of law in a particular college or university.
People attend university or college for many reasons including personal reasons. It is important to attend a college or university for people mostly for their life, career, knowledge and so on.
- TOEFL T P O 16 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- GRE Argument:The following appeared in an article written by Dr. Karp, an anthropologist.“Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia and concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an ent 33
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...people go to college to gain knowledge. people can learn different kinds of knowledge ...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this science' or 'those sciences'?
Suggestion: this science; those sciences
...nginnering, they can learn how to apply those science stuff and make the world easier and eas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27076923077 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76939144833 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498461538462 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1421214121 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.764705882 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389240418609 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155860051339 0.076458572812 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140001585928 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278912100532 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151383042159 0.0645574589148 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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