People in communities can make decisions that protect and improve the natural environment. Which one of the following three actions is most useful for people to do if they want to help the environment in their local community? Explain why? Increase access
The natural environment is one of the greatest and important parts of a community and all the communities all around the world try to use some decision and budgets to preserve these environments. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether creating parks and planting trees is beneficial to preserve the natural environment or not. I personally contend that planting trees and creating parks is very helpful and beneficial for preserving natural environment. I will elaborate on my point of view through the following paragraphs.
The first reason coming to mind about my idea is that plants and trees are a great resource for producing oxygen and taking CO2. As everybody knows, Co2 is a greenhouse gas and the amount of this gas is increasing every day especially in big and industrial cities, so by creating parks and planting trees, governments can reduce the amount of this gas because plants uptake CO2 and convert it to O2. For instance, last year, by the increase of air pollution in our city, the government decided to create 2 big parks in our city and after only one year the degree of pollution decreased for around 50% that this result was so exciting.
The other reason I would like to bring about my idea is that creating plants and creating parks provide an environment for animals and insects like birds, butterflies, cats, and other kinds of animals and by creating these place governments can help these kind of animal to do not extinct quickly. According to a recent report in National Geographic Journal, scientists illustrated that creating the national park of Gorgan in IRAN, survived around 14 wild speicies of insects in North of Iran.
The last but not the least reason is that planting trees and other kinds of plants can protect the stability of soil, the roots of plants and trees can hold the soil and don't let any factors like rains and winds wash out and spred the soil and by preserving soil communities can preserve their natural environements and protect their environment from air pollution that dust wind can creat.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reason lead us to the conclusion that creating parks and planting trees are one of the greatest decision that each community can do to protect it's natural invironment. All in all, it is highly recommend that govrnment dedicate some parts of their decision and budgets for creating parks and planting trees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'recommended'.
Suggestion: recommended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, regarding, so, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92493946731 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69590817723 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6186366122 48.9658058833 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.5 100.406767564 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4166666667 20.6045352989 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188638031966 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782838367919 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581905967797 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117905936264 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562628047528 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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