People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people?
For a long time ago, music plays a key role in various parts of people's lives. It is an integral part of cultures, traditions, or arts and can influence feelings. As far as I am concerned, I strongly believe that music soothes a human’s soul and be an evidence of human history. This essay will provide further aspects and examples to support this notion in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, music can soothe people's souls and reduce their stress. Most people today have their favorite songs to alleviate their bad feeling. Whether people feel sad or happy, music allows persons to unleash their emotions. Therefore, it is obviously friendly for all ages and genders. To illustrate this, Bodyslam, the famous musical band in Thailand, has many songs that have become a favorite tune of Thai citizens. Although they released many kinds of song that tell different stories, most of their songs propose to enhance people’s spirits. They state about problems or sadness and support listeners to never surrender.
Secondly, people can learn history from tunes and lyrics. Music is a vital part of the majority of human’s community. Historical humans use it to tell their milestones and celebrate their traditions. Therefore, melody from old times has become a cultural heritage to future humankind. For instance, one of the most famous classical music is symphony no.9, it is a masterpiece of Beethoven. This song has passed through generation to generation. These days, people also listen to this melody and impress in the tune and meaning. Additionally, a number of contemporary musicians learn Beethoven’s stories and have his songs to be their role model.
In conclusion, I firmly maintain the belief that music is an essential part of humans’ lives. This is due to the fact that music is not only an enjoyment thing that assuages an individual’s stress but also is a memorandum of human history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16772151899 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90006568004 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2368420753 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7619047619 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0476190476 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247395231642 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729329551926 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610683524792 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145871112611 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656005239456 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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