People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people?
From my point of view, music has a lot of influences on our lives and no one can deny its importance. These days, there are various kind of music in the world and people would like to listen to music because of different reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, according to the latest researches which were published in well-known journal, listening to music make people feel relax. Currently, people have to work hard or spend several hours a day studying. So that, they prefer to listen to music because it help them forget the pressure of work and become relax. In addition, researches have shown that people who listen to music regularly are less prone to mental disorders. Some psychologist also use music for treatment of depression and anxiety.
In the second place, listening to music can increase our efficiency. A lot of students read their lessons while they listen to music. In my opinion, it help students memorizing the information easily and in a more convenient way. For example, I used to do my assignments when I listen to music because it helps me concentrate and write my homework quickly.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that, music makes people feel happy. Countless teenagers and youth like attending concerts because they will be excited. Some celebrations like birthday and marriage have their own music and it is difficult to imagine holding these events without music. Undoubtedly, it will be boring. I believe that music is a good symbol of one country’s culture and if we want to know more about a country’s culture, we should study its traditional music.
Taking all the aforementioned reasons into account, it can be concluded that people have numerous reasons for listening to music such as becoming happy and relax, increase their efficiency and so forth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00322580645 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77457049202 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9905620579 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2352941176 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391444621066 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122499943649 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842059457149 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22410624608 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466067884658 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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