People should not have to pay for public transportations.
In modern era, face-pace of development advent the fast speed and more efficient the vehicles. The advancement not only in the private vehicle but public transportation also has been improving. Both rural and city regions need the public transportation because of all people can't afford the private vehicle. A controversial question is arise regarding this an idea that people have to pay for public transportations or not. Different people have various opinion about the idea. From my vantage point, I agree that public transportation should not take any charges from the people because of the following reasons.
To begin with, in a democratic country, public has right that they use the public transportations without charges,since the government take the taxes from the people in which all taxes are included such as road tax, toll tax this tax all people can't afford it. For an example, my father brought the car, even thought it expensive. He is not daily ride the car but he has to pay the car tax every month. Therefore, the people have right that they travel in public transportation without any pay.
Furthermore, travelling without any charges in public trasportations are lucrative idea for our society and government. If people have no cost for travelling in public trasnportations means it is encourage the to people the free ride and people are less ride to private vehicle. Its help to public that they save money of costly fuel and maintainance of their private vehicle. Besides, the government also get the benefit such as less private vehicle means no traffic and less air and noice pollution. The government save money of the regulate the traffic and safety cost.
In conclusion, contemplating aforementioned reasons,the public have right to not pay for public transportation and it is help to both public and government, It is not only save money but also provide the healthy environment. Therefore, I certainly concur that people should not have to pay for public transportations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ic transportation because of all people cant afford the private vehicle. A controver...
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Line 2, column 337, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'arisen'.
Suggestion: arisen
...te vehicle. A controversial question is arise regarding this an idea that people have...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , since
...e public transportations without charges,since the government take the taxes from the ...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... road tax, toll tax this tax all people cant afford it. For an example, my father br...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...g in public trasnportations means it is encourage the to people the free ride and people ...
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Line 4, column 532, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...pollution. The government save money of the regulate the traffic and safety cost. In concl...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...on, contemplating aforementioned reasons,the public have right to not pay for public...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12195121951 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03479720099 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466463414634 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7423718225 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8235294118 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.479063995522 0.236089414692 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169857838041 0.076458572812 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178782635888 0.0737576698707 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334192757219 0.150856017488 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153319988214 0.0645574589148 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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