people should specialize in one field instead of having basic knowledge in many fields.
Since ancestral times, people have pursued to have all knowledge to answer the innumerable questions. By the time, a lot of studies in all the areas have been performed, resulting in a large compiled of information available to study. The more you read, the more you learn, and more questions emerge. Therefore, people are required to specialize in one particular subject to become expert in the field.
To start with, all fields of study have evolved constantly. Technology advances allow more research to find out answers and solutions, at the time that a lot of information and data are released. Some fields, such as science and engineering, require expert people to work with particular equipment. For example, in the field of electronics, some people specialize only in robotics, which is a big branch of study. As expert in robotic, an engineer can design machines with a function of transporting materials from one place to another. That kind of achievement may not be successful if the engineer in charge have only basic knowledge of electronics.
In addition to that, there is not time to study many academic subjects and become expert in many fields; each area have a lot of information to learn, that consumes a lot of time while you are reading books and doing practices. For example, my major consumed five years, moreover, I needed 2 more years to get a master degree; thus, I required 7 years of study.
Therefore, I consider is better to focus in one particular field and do your best.
Moreover, having a specialized career increases the opportunity of get a better job. Being expert in one field makes a person more attractive to the market, since the person becomes unique and special. Companies look for new creative and innovative ideas to develop trades. Therefore, people who have basic knowledge get easily stock in an ocean of information that we count on today. The more specialized you get, the more value you become for a company.
To sum up, the advances of the technology and the acceleration of daily life needs people to be specialized. Being expert in one subject increases the opportunity to get a good job since you become a value employee and the same time that you contribute with the world development. That is why I agree that people should specialize in one field instead of having basic knowledge in many fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'pursued'.
Suggestion: pursued
Since ancestral times, people have pursue to have all knowledge to answer the inn...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...subject to become expert in the field. To start with, all fields of study have ...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...t answers and solutions, at the time of many information and data are released. Some...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... only basic knowledge of electronics. In addition to that, there is not time t...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
... academic subjects and become expert in many field; each area have a lot of information to...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs specialized" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'specializing' or 'to be specialized'.
Suggestion: specializing; to be specialized
...nd the acceleration of daily life needs specialized people. Being expert in one subject inc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78994963012 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491935483871 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2409720604 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423382789195 0.236089414692 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135765569016 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177749504395 0.0737576698707 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254330636961 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940541953636 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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