People today are much better informed about international news than they were in the past.
For ages, news channels are keeping people to get updated with day-to-day information happening around; the city or nearby villages. but today, due to advance technology, relationships among nations, and publicity etc helping us to get the international news. Thus, I agree that people today are much better informed about international news than it was earlier. The reason I will explore in the following essay.
Earlier, world was not advanced with technology. The first time, when telegram was invented and used in the market, it was helping to transfer information within the cities. but, as time passed, scientific research has led us to share information through satellite. now, news is broadcasted around the world using satellite transmission. Electronic signal has completely changed the range of news but also improve its quality. Therefore, We can say that technology is helping to know what is happening around the globe.
Further, as the relationship between the two nations is getting stronger, the economical growth of the world is also improving. people are connecting with others from different countries. Products are exchanged for better progress of the whole world. Indirectly, this relationship is also helping humans to get international news. when the economy of one nation is interlinked to the other nation, then it becomes important to keep information of others. Nothing is left hidden now. this leads to improvement in the international news than past.
Thus, In conclusion, I can say that based upon the reasons I mentioned above, the news range has enhanced since the last century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93626779927 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2544379184 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5555555556 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300793738431 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881207908312 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133987066768 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16756372781 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133751802835 0.0645574589148 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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