Someone has rightly said “If you love your job, it isn’t a job anymore it’s a love affair”. The statement accurately describes the relation between a man and his work. Time should be considered as a valuable resource capable of paving a way towards success or failure .the deciding factor being how someone utilize his time and for what purpose. I firmly admit that though people spend majority of for recreational purposes rather than doing the things they are required to do. But, what they do in their recreational activities has a much more profound effect on both mental and physical fitness.
Psychological studies have shown that by doing the things we like or love produces three hormones namely endorphin's, dopamine and serotonin a combination of which induces a feeling of happiness and contentment .Whereas, by doing the things that we do not love but are forced to do starts a conflict between our consciousness and neural activities which result in sadness. For instance a person who loves to solve mathematical problems is forced to write essays for his employer in order to earn a living would never feel satisfied with his job. Mere reason being that he doesn’t love his current work.However, if the job had been related to mathematics the person would have felt contented and satisfied.
Although many would argue that investing more time for personal recreation is a waste of time but this view is based on some unsubstantative assumptions and do not consider the kind or the complexity of work done during the recreational time. Example being a person might enjoy computer programming
and do the same in his recreational time .Now would anyone consider this waste of time ? a majority of us would respond with ‘No’ . The main fact to ponder is that the things we do in our recreational time decides whether we are wasting or time or using it wisely.
In conclusion of above mentioned reasons and examples. I would like to suggest that everyone should do whatever they like to do but should decide wisely what they actually want to pursue or do.In order to use time wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9748603352 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80950629422 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572625698324 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.5611853998 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.733333333 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422715487344 0.236089414692 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133917482488 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155279088314 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248655653095 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804934693733 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.