While the author of the passage claims that the bird population is going to decline in future because of the current trends in population and agriculture .The professor disagrees with these claims and defends her position by mentioning some substantive reasons to rely upon.
Firstly,she disagrees with the fact that an increase in buildings due to a growth in human population will result in a decline of bird population.She supports her stand by citing that city dwellers often report that the bird populations have increased since newer buildings are erected .Which means that the birds accept buildings as their habitats.However ,the professor also adds that while populations of some bird species may decline others may increase.
Secondly, she refutes the authors claim of decline in bird population due to increase in the agriculture area because no new land is being used for agriculture purposes in the U.S .She ponders on the fact that instead of increasing agriculture area new seeds had been developed that resulted in more produce per unit area of land.
At last she deny's the author's last claim that increase in pesticide will result in decrease in bird population.She asserted that new pesticides are such formulated that they become unattractive to the pests so the pests doesn't consume them.As a result the pests are not poisoned and are safe to be consumed by birds.She further adds to the fact that newer pesticides doesn't contain any chemical compound that may harm the bird population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16260162602 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79867347216 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544715447154 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 61.0 21.2450331126 287% => Sentence length is too long
Sentence length SD: 76.0936922484 49.2860985944 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 317.5 110.228320801 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.5 21.698381199 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06452816374 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 4.19205298013 429% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415835958729 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232968704928 0.0996497079465 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510309800188 0.0662205650399 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232968704928 0.162205337803 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510309800188 0.0443174109184 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.6 13.3589403974 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 53.8541721854 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 5.55761589404 263% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.0289183223 246% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.42419426049 124% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.7273730684 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.498013245 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.2008830022 259% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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