People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons.
We spend 40 years on average working for one or more jobs to feed our family and to provide shelter, education, and healthcare for our family. A study conducted in the early 2000s showed that most of us do not like our day to day job but we continue the daily job because we need the money to live. Although most of us are just working to survive some works for different reasons such as love for a subject or to create a positive impact on society.
While the majority of the population does not enjoy what they study in their school/college some do and their love for the subject carries them forward in life. They enrich the subject they study. One of my closest friends loved studying physics since childhood and he received job offers from Bell Labs and JP Morgan Chase after his graduation. Although the JPMC job offered a significantly high salary he still chose Bell Labs because he loved what he did. For him enjoying his daily job was much more important than an astronomical bank balance.
Another part of the population works to make a dent in the universe. Their goal is to perform a task, not necessarily difficult, that creates a significant impact throughout society. One such notable person was Steve Jobs. He revolutionized mobile phones, personal computers, and the tape-recorder industry. These are the people who care less about their priorities and even lesser about money. Their sole priority is to make this world a better place. More often than not they leave the world in much better shape than they found it.
Money is a necessary component for our society and most of us work to earn money but there still remain a significant number of people who are working for numerous other reasons. Broadly they can be classified into the two groups we discussed above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...into the two groups we discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72611464968 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52386877368 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576433121019 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.371813276 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2941176471 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287492087547 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723566285965 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586374853576 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160201212306 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532320292063 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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