A person should never make an important decision alone.
Every decision have its own advantages and disadvantages. We should choose the decision that has fewer disadvantages, for deciding this we can take help of other people. I agree with the statement that a person should never make an important decision alone. In support, we should consider the following three points.
First of all, the decision taken alone might be risky for an individual or for society because a single person can think in only one direction and that might be the wrong way. For example, one of my friends decided to buy a car because he likes the design of that car and after buying a car he come to know that maintenance of that car is expensive. This risk arises because he thought in only one direction on another hand if he asked about that car to other people he might avoid this risky situation.
Secondly, we should take the opinions of other people who are perfectionists in a specific domain of decision because these people have prior experience in that domain and they can guide us through important decision making. For instance, during my decision making of choosing a graduation field, I consulted with people who have experience in that field this help me in making important decisions and which result in I am doing great in my field of work.
Additionally, if we asked more people before taking a decision we will get to know more advantages and disadvantages of situation and which will help us in taking correct decision. For example, the behavior survey 2019 states that people who took decision consulting as many people as they can results in more correct decision because, people get to know all angels of the situation and avoid wrong decisions.
In conclusion, an individual should consider his own opinion while taking any decision but it is necessary to consider other people's opinions which will result in a more correct decision. After considering the above three points, I agree with the statement made above that people should not take the important decision alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: who is a are
...hould take the opinions of other people who are perfectionists in a specific domain of ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...n consulting as many people as they can results in more correct decision because, peopl...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not take the important decision alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63884166443 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456395348837 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1846682667 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295905676972 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128102892492 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147681023648 0.0737576698707 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175782800656 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11421072662 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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