A person should never make an important decision alone. Do you agree or disagree?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that decisions play a dominant role in human beings' lives whether a sound decision or an idiot decision. Indeed, crowds of people take a risk and make a decision to determine different situations. Stemming from this fact a relevant question that is a moot point is whether individuals should make a decision solely. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general agreement on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that makes a decision alone could have deleterious effects on people's lives. The following reasons will aptly substantiate my personal perspective.
To commence with, a plethora of people make an effort and bend over backward to reach success and make a progress day in day out. But this situation will not come true if people do not make a right decision. Generally phrased, myriads of people are not enough mature and experience to make an important decision by themselves and indeed, they need to consult with experienced and successful people. For instance, successful people never do something without any plan and a right decision so, they will not do something wrong. If people take others opinion into consideration, they will ensure to be successful in near future. To elucidate more on this issue, make a significant decision by taking other ideas into account not only can guarantee people's success but also can provide an opportunity for people not to do something wrong and become self-sufficient individuals in their personal lives.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that if people make a decision solely, vast majorities of the problem will not come to his/her mind on the spur of the moment. To put it in another word, make a decision require to take positive and negative consequences into consideration and analyze or examine the situation meticulously. Going into the depth, do not take important opinion into account when making an important decision will cause stress, which might impact people's decision negatively. As a matter of fact, it is better not to take a risk and consult with experienced people. However, make an important decision exclusively will certainly provide fertile ground for people to be responsible for their actions. In this way, people will enhance their self-confident and self-esteem.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that make a decision is of utmost important skill that provides an opportunity for people to achieve success. But take others opinion into account will ensure people not to do something wrong and make a progress continually. Besides, consult with other will cause lower stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
...n another word, make a decision require to take positive and negative consequences into...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, for instance, as a matter of fact, by and large, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1298405467 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87348579711 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473804100228 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8209742666 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.238095238 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9047619048 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271341895516 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932322989802 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637887695942 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19132209587 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251651552074 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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