Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Agriculture has been occupying a pivotal role in people's survival for thousands of years. Globalization made possible trade of plants and fruits everywhere, and each country exploited some of them. One of the most important plant in my country is the potato. This is due to the fact that it has an accessible price and because it can be cultivated everywhere. I will explain my reasons in detail, in the following essay.
First and foremost, the price of potato is suitable and many people can afford to buy it. My country is not well-developed and the wages are quite low. Moreover, there are many individuals who do not have a monthly income, and consequently their main resource of food is this plant. Furthermore, there are many types of food that include using potatoes. For instance, foods like smashed potatoes, french fries, pies, soups are among the most popular. So, aside its affordable price, it can be used to cook various delicious dishes.
To continue with, potato can resist to harsh weather conditions, so it can be cultivated all over the country. In fact, half of the dwellers live in the countryside and all of them have parcels, so peasants do not have to spend money for it. In addition, potato can be used to ease the symptoms of some illnesses. My experience is a compelling example if this. Back in childhood, when I had a flue and my throat was red, my mother used to boil potatoes and put them on my chest. The pain was attenuated, and in a few hours I could eat and speak normally again. Thus, potatoes can be cultivated by numerous people and it has beneficial effects for health too.
To summarize, one of the most significant vegetable in my native country is the potato. This is because its price is not high and many inhabitants can afford to purchase it, and because people living in the countryside have the possibility to cultivate it by themselves, even when the weather conditions are not appropriate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the countryside and all of them have parcels, so peasants do not have to spen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74926253687 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76687359522 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545722713864 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3914965443 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164284040427 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564695842496 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491469851422 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112381961957 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519586976316 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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