prefer to live in a big city, which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answers.
Cities or places, which everyone lives in a place in the world and enjoy their lifes.
However, towns and big cities doesn’t have that much difference but according to facilities and comforts they differ. In which I would choose big cities in the following reasons which I’m going to explore.
Firstly, big cities make lifes much more easier to live. By making accessories and machines that makes life much more easier to go. I still remember that when we were living in a town 5 years ago. We were 5 people in our family and everyone has to do something for living and the works were so hard and my job was to fill water to tankers everyday that the tankers were small and much more. Because of that my half day goes to filling tankers, and carrying them to home. However, if we had a machine had could had filled water automatically whenever it goes out of water. It could have saved much more time of mine. In which I could have learned lots of information and studied my school books.
Secondly, big cities have more accessories that makes life easier and cheaper; like freezers, air conditioners, airports, modern facilities and restaurants. Big cities are highways among countries that exports and imports. Overall, when I was in Allah Chapan( a small town in Afghanistan) you could barely find something that you want like Air conditioners. In Allah Chapan the temperature is always high: between 35-45. So, you can rarely find an air conditioner to normalise houses. However, in big cities you can find anything that u think of.
In conclusion, I would I like to say that big cities don’t let you work hard but let you warm smart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 37, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... Firstly, big cities make lifes much more easier to live. By making accessories and mach...
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Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ories and machines that makes life much more easier to go. I still remember that when we we...
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Line 4, column 340, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...and my job was to fill water to tankers everyday that the tankers were small and much mo...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72413793103 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54803087806 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7436120014 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1111111111 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161531546797 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561474983727 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559127311091 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109881823063 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033937648133 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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