Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is often viewed as a bad quality for a person to have,but,in fact,it is a good quality for a person to have.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is generally assumed that making decision as quick as possible that some one can do, plays paramount role in life. That having been considered, whether is a good quality or not, has always been a much- debated argument. Despite the argument assert that it could be a good feature, I believe otherwise, maintaining that a slow decision maker considers all ramifications of a situations can bring other brains.
Firs and most obvious, we cannot lose sight of the fact that making decision in a racial time give you enough chance to consider all aspect of a situation. Strictly speaking, when someone take enough time to make a decision it is more likely to make a true or the best one. The best example that fits this argument is, when someone ask for a favor, money for instance and you give a positive answer to the request and after a while you regret because you need that money for an important situation and whether you want or not you are in a difficult position, give the money to your friend or not. Therefore, it leaves no doubt that slow decision makers face less problems and difficulties.
Another equally important point to consider is, you can bring other brains on different issues, can consult with professional persons and see the situations with different eyes. For the purpose of illustration, let's consider the issue of, when someone want to buy a new car and hesitated between two options, he or she can consult with someone professional and make the best decision. As a consequence, it goes without saying that slow decision making is a good quality.
In a final analysis, some might contend that making quick decision save a lot of time, I take issue with them and believe this mind-set is nothing but a tunnel vision that ignores the importance of considering all aspect of a situation and consulting with others. In the grand scheme of things, it behooves to make decision with caution and it's requirement to take time on that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...king decision as quick as possible that some one can do, plays paramount role in life. T...
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Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a situation' or simply 'situations'?
Suggestion: a situation; situations
...on maker considers all ramifications of a situations can bring other brains. Firs and mos...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...uation. Strictly speaking, when someone take enough time to make a decision it is mo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
...hat fits this argument is, when someone ask for a favor, money for instance and you...
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Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...no doubt that slow decision makers face less problems and difficulties. Another e...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ets consider the issue of, when someone want to buy a new car and hesitated between ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76539589443 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62409765334 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527859237537 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2570676555 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.416666667 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279968557734 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934727628634 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372514909768 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153737992916 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293771819654 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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