The similarities between the internet and television
If we talk about breaking news, entertainment, sports or lifestyle first and most important things which come up to our minds are internet and television. No one can deny that there are numerous of commonalities and I will explain why is like that in the following essay.
I believe that television, as an equal to internet source of information can provide to people necessary amount of daily news. This can be the first and essential similarity between the two unique devices, based on purposes they are used for. I remember when my first computer was bought by my parents it was with no internet connection for a short period. Then it was impossible for me to used it and familiar myself with a situations around the globe. Therefore, I was tranquil by having a television in the room and watching form time to time some interesting and compelling facts regarding variety of fields. For example, in the very beginning with the invention of TV, mankind had been aware of the only purpose of the TV as a source of information, which they encountered daily. Later on, when the internet came in our life, everyone realized that they can use it for the same purpose, like they used television even in a more convenient and revamped way.
Furthermore, we can use television for watching premiere movies. This in turn, makes it so attractive among people and denote it's tantamount effect to the internet. Nowadays, there are TV channels which emit high-quality movies by paying a package for that purposes.Everyone can watch the latest released movies not only on internet, but also on TV.
To sum up, internet and television are considered as the most popular contrivances in the world which contribute in equal way to human society. Mostly due to drawing information related to the world situations, and watching an interesting movies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a situation' or simply 'situations'?
Suggestion: a situation; situations
... me to used it and familiar myself with a situations around the globe. Therefore, I was tran...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Everyone
...s by paying a package for that purposes.Everyone can watch the latest released movies no...
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Line 4, column 240, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'movie'?
Suggestion: movie
...situations, and watching an interesting movies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90675241158 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89864204443 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0423655621 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216122143688 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649147001923 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513110827422 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113342751897 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449349704157 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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