In some countries teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think that this is a good idea? Suppose your opinions by using specific details and examples.
In our country, it is really common for a teenager to have a job while studying. I think it is really a good
idea that a teenage is working during his or her student’s life. I think this way because of following
reasons.
First, working during student’s life will help you to prepare for your career. While some teenagers will
spend and waste their student’s life in filthy works like smoking, clubbing, fighting and getting along
with bad peers which will eventually lead to hamper their own career, if they would spend this extra
time in some work, it will help them shape their way to career. For instance, I had a friend from high
school. He was really interested in cooking and culinary arts. This led him to work in a local restaurant
which was very famous for its food. He learned so much about food and hotel management that
benefited him for getting into university for getting higher education in culinary arts. Now, he is a very
famous chef who works in one of the prestigious restaurant of our country. He always says that working
in that local restaurant was the most valuable experience in his life that made him want to work more
for his career.
Second, if we work some off school hours, it really helps you to earn some money. After working, the
money that we earn will be very useful to us and of course, we won’t have to ask money to our parents
that will be really helpful for them too. To explain that: five years ago, when I was in university studying
for my college degree, I used to work some evening shift nearby movie theater as a cashier. It was just
three to four hours working shift and not that much load on too. At the end of month I used to get some
really good some of money that I could use as my pocket money for whole month. I really felt good that
I did not have to ask my parents for money also plus they were very happy knowing I was being
responsible too. On the other hand, my grades were good too so working really did not hamper my
studies.
All in all, while some might think that working during student’s life is not a good idea, I think unless it
hampers your study, it can be beneficial in many ways. So, that’s why I think teenagers should have jobs
while studying.
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| 2018-12-12 | Nikee Shrestha | 70 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, second, so, while, for instance, i think, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5156626506 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36113103386 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493975903614 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0464469197 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.53405017921 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185598366204 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684254221797 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637535608089 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649275622305 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622334350485 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.