Some people are eager to earn more and more money while some are satisfied with comfortable life. Give a stand on this issue.
It is very much true that people with different priorities in life grade the importance of money differently. Some people are focused to earn more and more money throughout their lifespan but on the other hand, there are many people who are satisfied with the small amout of money that can provide a comfortable living. This priority depends on the demand and satisfaction of the people and his/her family.
Primarily, I would like to discuss about the first scenario where people are eager to earn large amounts of money. This attitude of the person generally arises because he or his family has a never ending demand and expectations. If he owns a bike, he wishes to buy a car. Moreover, if owns an Alto car, his demand increases and he wants to buy a Ford. He is never satisfied with what he has.
Secondarily, there are also persons who are satisfied with the amout they are earning. They give more time to their family and are happy with whatever they can buy. They have limited demands. If they own a motorbike, they do not wish to buy a car. So, they do not have greed to earn more and more.
In my opinion , we should not be greedy about the money because lust for money never stops. We spend most of out time to earn more, live comfortably but in reality we do not have time to live anymore. We become workaholic and forget to live our life. We should be satisfied with the money what we have and develop a sense of satisfaction towards it. It is often seen that a billionaire who owns multiple bunglows and car is not happy because he does not have time to spend with his family. On the other hand, a middle class man living in a rented house is happy because he gets to his family after his job and spends time with them.
In the end, I would like to say that we should be satisfied with our comfortable living.
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| 2018-07-27 | Prasoon Singh | 60 | view |
| 2018-06-17 | priyam agarwal | 60 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to earn more and more. In my opinion , we should not be greedy about the money...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...workaholic and forget to live our life. We should be satisfied with the money what...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41002949853 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34480025488 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469026548673 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8538827351 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.75 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295517546648 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881266658779 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923533202535 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169594392444 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114872880778 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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