From a broad perspective, in the current state of affairs we face, in which human become an integral part of the world. It is far-fetched to presume that human activity have a significant impact on earth. A growing segment of people believe that human can damage the earth. While others hold the view that earth will be the better place by human activity. The aim of this essay is to discuss both these views.
First and foremost, human can cause a lot of damage for earth. Many factories which has built produce a great deal of smog. Also, it creates chemical wastes and toxic materials which can cover the sky and clouds. Chemical materials which produce by factory will contaminate the weather and drinkable water. It demonstrates that people do not care about environment and do what they want. In this condition, many species cannot survive and the extinction of the animals and insects can harm the earth as they have beneficial effect for earth.
Moreover, people really harm the environment and earth by deforestation. They cut the trees and shrubs in order to generate paper and useful things.The more you cut trees, The less oxygen produces. For example, there was a famous forest in my country but people destroyed it for their personal purpose. Because of that that jungle altered to the desert since there were no trees there.
Thirdly, using cars can damage the earth. Cars created a lot of fumes which can affect the temperature. Actually it increases the speed of global warming. Consequently, many ices start to melt and sea levels will be enhanced. Besides, ozone layer adversely affected by temperature. For instances, my country really suffer from high temperature which is caused by human activity.
In conclusion, as I mentioned above I really believe that human activity have a detrimental effect on earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...elieve that human can damage the earth. While others hold the view that earth will be...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...der to generate paper and useful things.The more you cut trees, The less oxygen pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, really, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59020919492 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7445831389 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.3636363636 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27574225235 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821847010812 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956114495514 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161651230462 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878836422028 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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