Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The earth is the most important thing to humankind life. All we have is from mother earth, our energy like fossil energy, our food, our water all comes from the earth. So keeping the earth safe is our most important duty as a human. Despite of many people who think that human actions were harmful to the earth, there are some people who believe otherwise. In my opinion, most of our actions were harmful to the earth and some of them are indisputable.
First, greenhouse gases that humans produce. The earth naturally has the greanhouse effect which is trapping the sun's energy in the atmosphere and make the climate more temperate. But the human's actions have raised the amount of these greenhouse gases such as CO2 which led to a warmer planet, consequently, ices have melted in the poles and the see's level has risen and it threats many of species lives on the earth. For example in the BBC famous documentary film, Planet Earth, were stated that every year human actions add millions of tons of CO2 to the atmosphere and this plenty CO2 caused the earth to get warmer 1.5 Celcius degree in last 100 years. Sadly these actions aren't going to decrease and scientists predict that earth will get warmer in the coming years.
Second, materials that we produced were harmful to the environment in many cases such as plastics. Plastics are non-destructive material which remains in nature for hundred years and is harmful to many animals. Animals such as fishes eat these plastics and these plastics stick to their throats and cause to injury or even death of them. I remember that this year the Coca-Cola company eventually released the number of plastics is consuming every year to produce colas. It is 6 million tons of plastics. It is so enormous amount to handle by nature. Unfortunately, Coca-Cola isn't the only company uses a lot of plastics, manufacturers like automobile factories every year uses a lot of plastics which is much more than Coca-Cola usage. For example, I read on a scientific website, Zoomit, the Toyota is using 50 million ton of plastics every year.
To sum up, in my opinion, all we have are from the mother earth and even the most valuable thing that we have is the earth. I believe that our actions were harmful to the earth in many cases. Two important of them are the release of greenhouse gases and producing a huge amount of plastics. If we don't do anything for this awful situation, maybe we never will have an opportunity to fix it and rescue from extinction. So get up and raise your voice as much as it will be enough to make a change in the world.
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- TPO-23 - Integrated Writing Task 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...arth safe is our most important duty as an human. Despit of many people think that...
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Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'suns'' or 'sun's'?
Suggestion: suns'; sun's
... greanhouse effect which is traping the suns energy in atomesphar and make the clima...
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Line 2, column 516, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'millions of'.
Suggestion: millions of
...tated that every year human actions add millions of millions of tones of CO2 to the atomesphare and thi...
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Line 2, column 683, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... in last 100 years. Sadly these actions arent going to decrease and scientists predic...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...aterial which remains in the nature for hundred years, and is harmful for many animals....
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ndle by nature. Unfortunatlly Coca-Cola isnt the only company uses a lot of plastics...
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Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... To sum up, in my opinion all we have are from the mother earth and even the most...
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Line 4, column 285, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...roducing huge amount of plastics. If we dont do anything for this awful situation, m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, for example, such as, in many cases, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68584070796 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45079224853 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473451327434 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8269649433 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0869565217 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.652173913 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218622170208 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682672199992 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603745261396 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136663463794 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619554209825 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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