some people believe that the internet provides them with a lot of valuable information, others claim that too much information could create problems
In the last 20 years, the world has become very intricate and technologically advanced. Some people believe that internet invention creates problems; however, others claim that the internet is a crucial innovation. From a personal perspective, the latter point of view carries more weight given that the internet has a positive impact on education, transportation and communication.
The first and foremost point, with the internet, education has improved drastically. For example, schools in developed countries, such as Canada and the United States design learning activities on the internet, which enhance students' understanding and promote their intelligible capacity. Furthermore, provided that students use searching websites, such as Google and YouTube, they could open the door to a wealth of information, which augments their fundamental knowledge and amplifies their academic performance. Consequently, implementing the internet in education has integral benefits.
Next, coupled with proper education, better transportation is another virtue of the internet. For instance, throughout the internet people could use data connection ability, such as GPS to navigate their destination and get where they want to go. Moreover, people could use phone's apps, such as Google Map to find the best routes and know the traffic condition; thereby, they could not only reduce commute time, but also save money and gas. Therefore, the internet improves people's quality of life.
ultimately, 50 years ago people could not communicate easily; however, the internet has made the world a global village. A vivid example of that people could use the internet to access many apps, such as WhatsApp and Viber to coomunicate with anyone at any place in the world; likewise, it is cost-effective. In addition to that, almost all the people who access the web have social media accounts, so they communicate with their firends with means of like, comment and share. As a result, the internet communication has made sure to connect people from two sides of the earth with no problem at all.
Taking everything into comsideration; without a doubt, the internet has many virtues and underestimating these benefits is not logical. It is suggested that advocate for education in order to continue to develop and progress.
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| 2019-10-08 | Christine hanna | 88 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ultimately
...et improves peoples quality of life. ultimately, 50 years ago people could not communic...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to continue to develop and progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50280898876 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00769118878 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5310873151 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.235294118 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268078377204 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840340843892 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733870589609 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131640284814 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610267987869 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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