Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using using machines. Which do you prefer?
With the rapid invention of technologies, we can be witnesses of considerable changes in people's way of work. Even though, there are still some proponents of conventional way of working using hands, the majority of people prefer doing work by machines. Personally, I believe that using machines can have advantages over hand-made work and I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, machines can provide faster and easier outcomes in a particular work field. Example of this is the invention of the computer and digital access to library in order to find books, articles, encyclopedias. Instead of going to a local library and spending enormous time in searching for a specific book, we can just type a title in a digital system and download the book we need exponentially swift.
Moreover, we can carry out tasks with undisputed accuracy. In contrast when we use hands, very often we are threatened to make a mistake or miss an important thing which can cause profound ramifications. For instance, when we count a huge amount of money nowadays we use machine for that to make it precisely. With the help of a money counter people can stave off gaps, errors or potential deceives. If banks had not used money counters, their employees would have played out many customers.
In conclusion, I would say that there are myriad of avails using machines. Most important are rapid and accurate performance of tasks and obligations. Although, many people still prefer old-fashion work, I do believe that this will not last for long due to intensive changes in technologies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98106060606 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85942200312 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598484848485 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5968767023 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265958504298 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864696530963 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971242402908 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168156962296 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11710797973 0.0645574589148 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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