some people may prefer to live in a small city while others may prefer to live in a big one
No one can deny that each person has his/her priority to make their decision to live in a small town or a big one. Some may prefer to live in an urban city while others may prefer to live in a small town or rural culture. From my perspective, The first idea looks rational and in the following article, I will elaborate on my point cogently.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is education. Education could be considered as one of the most important aspects we should look for before we make our decision especially if we have kids. In major cities, they have a new and modern education system which has been obtained through previous generation experience or borrowed from other advanced programs in other countries. For example, In the modern era, Japan's education system achieved first place in education level between other countries depending on the result of a survey on Texas university about this issue. This kind of achievement is one of many other causes that helped Japan to pass the war damage. In addition to the previous points, recently schools begun to encourage students through adding advanced programs to the regular curriculums, such as gifted and talented programs. These kinds of programs helped students to be more involved with the school besides it may create a good opportunity for their education in the future.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is the hospitals and medical services. in big cities, we can find advanced medical centers and hospitals with up to date in equipment, medicine, and researches. Furthermore, we can find professional doctors with high skills in a different specialty. For example, my son has been diagnosed with chronic kidney disease. When we arrived to the United State, we blessed with one of the most developed hospitals in the world, Texas Children Hospital. They are so professional in the way they deal with the patient and his/her medical problem.
To wrap it up, all the after-mentioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that each one may have different aspects to look for in his/her city. Education and health are the most valuable aspects need to be available in any community especially if we have kids, we have to consider their health side moreover their education and future achievements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... is the hospitals and medical services. in big cities, we can find advanced medica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01822916667 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74558589671 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7747117669 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.055555556 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216857542179 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685900683044 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156379614764 0.0737576698707 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160485041912 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.199308354958 0.0645574589148 309% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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