Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
These days, many restaurants opened in our society, but different people have different lifestyles about eating. Some people prefer eating at restaurants, while others think that eating at home is better. As far as I am concerned, I strongly prefer eating out, and I will explore the reasons further in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, eating at restaurants can save our time as cooking and preparing are time-consuming. It is undeniable that when one decides to prepare and cook, one needs to spare more time for grocery shopping before cooking and cleaning after eating. Therefore, if people decide to eat at restaurants, they will have more time for other activities. I can attest to this from my own experience. When my family cooks our dinner at home, we will spend a large amount of time shopping for groceries. Afterward, we prepare ingredients, and then, we cook and clean the kitchen. As a result, the processes spend our time at least three hours. On the contrary, dining at a bistro near my home is more convenient, and it allows me to have time for other things, such as studying or playing sport. As you can see, eating at home is too burdensome.
Secondly, eating out is surprisingly economical. Although a majority of people now have a perception that restaurants are too expensive, they are, in fact, economical. At some restaurants, people only have to spend a pittance on quality food and drinks. Furthermore, in terms of ingredients, individuals are needless to prepare and buy a large amount of food that exceeds their desire. People who choose eating out pay on the proper size of a dish for an individual. To illustrate this, when I was a university student, I usually ate at the small diner located near the university. This restaurant is quite cheap because the owner desired to open this for students. Therefore, all dishes' prices are less than sixty baht, so they are affordable. This place not only is convenient and tasty, but it also supports students to save up the money.
In conclusion, I firmly maintain the belief that dining out is better than eating at home. This is due to the fact that it is really economical, and people can save more time cooking and cleaning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to eat'.
Suggestion: to eat
...exceeds their desire. People who choose eating out pay on the proper size of a dish fo...
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Line 5, column 716, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'baht' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'bahts'.
Suggestion: bahts
..., all dishes prices are less than sixty baht, so they are affordable. This place not...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, at least, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85526315789 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.798113482 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528947368421 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7098778968 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2173913043 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5217391304 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95652173913 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326263339878 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967365200983 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979419938058 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213626273429 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932160457552 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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