Some people prefer to exercise as their leisure activities. Other people prefer to read or watch movies. Which do you prefer?
Some people prefer to exercise whenever they have free time, while others prefer to participate in activities that are more sedentary, such as reading or watching movies. Personally, favor reading books or watching movies to exercising when I am vacant.
First of all, I care about saving money a lot, and reading books or watching movies can help me save a significant amount of money. For instance, when I was studying in high school, I always watched movies or short videos on Youtube during my leisure time. Consequently, unless I purchase a premium version of Youtube, I can relish all these movies without spending a single dollar. Moreover, from time to time, I read magazines and novels in my school library because it cost me no money to do so. However, I might spend more than $75 dollars on the equipment fee per year if I want to exercise in a gym. Similarly, I must pay $25 every month in order to use the basketball fields near my school. Clearly, enjoying movies or books is a better hobby for me, because it can prevent me from wasting too much money.
In addition, I place an emphasis on my studying a lot, and watching movies and reading books during my leisure time can help me learn better. For example, if I read a science fiction, I am able to gain a great deal of advanced science knowledge in a relatively relaxed mood. Similarly, I can learn geography, history, philosophy, and ethics by watching numerous documentations on Netflix. In other words, I can absorb additional knowledge when I am having fun, and perhaps this knowledge can help me learn better in various courses. Nevertheless, if I go exercising, such as joggling in the park or riding a bicycle, I might learn nothing when I am relaxing. Evidently, reading books and watching movies is a better hobby for me because it can help me learn new skills while relaxing.
Last but not least, I am a type of person who get stressed easily, and relishing movies and books can help me relieve lots of my pressure. To be more specific, my university is a high-competitive one, so I spend literally 6 to 8 hours per day studying, and I feel worn out all the time. Accordingly, I always watch interesting movies that make me laugh and cheer me up, such as comedies or cartoons. By doing so, it can helps me refresh my mind, so that when I go back to work, I can feel less stressed. Nonetheless, going to the gym makes me feel uncomfortable due to the odor and claustrophobic environment. In other words, I might not be able to get rid of my stress if I go exercising in the gym.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Patience is usually not a good strategy we should take action now rather than later Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...uring my leisure time can help me learn better. For example, if I read a science ficti...
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Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...erhaps this knowledge can help me learn better in various courses. Nevertheless, if I ...
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Line 7, column 421, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...medies or cartoons. By doing so, it can helps me refresh my mind, so that when I go b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55965292842 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80720125395 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509761388286 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.8451803051 48.9658058833 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.095238095 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9523809524 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185617666599 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605955800453 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922745269419 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165883276116 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162187053282 0.0645574589148 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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