Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day`s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
When it comes to the issue about the best time to start the work, some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. However, others have the opposite view and like to get up later and work until late at night. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account the following reasons.
First and the most important reasons is that waking up in early morning is a health habit. In fact, body’s cycle follows the nature; when the moon rises, it is time to go to bed; and when the sun rises, it is time to wake up. Hence, if you get a good night’s sleep in the quite midnight, you could start the day with fresh energy. In addition, when we get up in early morning; before going to work, we have enough time to do some physical exercise like hiking or riding the bicycle. So, it is quite normal that we can possess the healthier life when we are accustomed to wake up in early morning.
A further point we must consider is that we can more focus on our duties in the morning. The recent scientific researches demonstrate that the amount of employees’ mistakes during work is so low in the morning shift than other time. These studies prove this point that human can show a high performance and focus on their responsibilities. I think that a small instance can give some light on this matter. Nowadays, most of schools in the developed Western countries hold classes at the morning. They detect that students’ concentration in the morning class is more than that of in the evening class.
Apart from point I made above, it is easy to take care of everyday work if you get up in the morning. For instance, when all family members wake up early morning, wife have enough time to make breakfast for all family, children could catch school bus on time, and father does not forget to change his dirty shirt.
Al above evidence supports this undeniable fact that start the day’s work at morning have many advantages such as increase your health and performance as well as we can take care everyday work easily. Of course, as an English proverb goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore’ those who take the opposite view may be partly reasonable that waking up at the morning is difficult for most people. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that its benefits outweigh dangerous.
- TOEFL T P O 20 Integrated Writing Task 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to waking'.
Suggestion: accustomed to waking
... possess the healthier life when we are accustomed to wake up in early morning. A further point...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the schools') or simply say ''most schools''.
Suggestion: most of the schools; most schools
...ve some light on this matter. Nowadays, most of schools in the developed Western countries hold...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'of course', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239436619718 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.140845070423 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0945674044266 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0402414486922 0.046263068375 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0523138832998 0.0685040099705 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118712273642 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0120724346076 0.0351676179071 34% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.59303902015 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0261569416499 0.0309702414327 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0160965794769 0.00188951952338 852% => OK
Determiners: 0.0945674044266 0.0887237588012 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0181086519115 0.0209618222197 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0140845070423 0.0139019557991 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2388.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 423.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64539007092 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.28841607565 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.210401891253 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139479905437 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0780141843972 0.112833075102 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59303902015 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536643026005 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 61.7298004829 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.15 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2690771466 48.84282405 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.15 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.85 0.644075263715 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 42.1901891253 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.58620689655 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528023495958 0.300154397459 176% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110173994144 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0898244760529 0.0752933317313 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.539540952461 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161728832527 0.151897553556 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188757840783 0.114077575197 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144720041728 0.0781384742642 185% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.296283231165 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.152779176526 0.067059652881 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343042649464 0.210909579961 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166160249375 0.0618886996521 268% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.